Guys - I have to reiterate Ms Johnson's post a couple of weeks ago - you do have some individual elements of research that are valuable, but this needs to be more cohesive - you must add the following:
1. group discussion / ideas
3. Visual ideas - like George's examples - but you need more inspiration
3. Screen shots from videos to illustrate your research
4. Audience research findings?
5. Analysis of pitch - what was feedback? What problems are you encountering? How can you overcome them?
6. If you have issues with the concept that need resolving, document them - do some research, find some ideas, post on blog
7. post on discussions in today's class for example - even if it raised more questions than answers
You have the skills to really turn this around - but you will need to face the blank spaces in your concept head on and watch some videos looking for ideas
